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Little Crooked creek begins with a stunning opening that lets us, the readers, take fight and journey into a world of color and texture --

this white cleanliness

sheathed in clover

streaks like a 747

on an icy runway

as the poem progresses, we submerge ourselves in something beyond "meadow "and "birdsong" the sensuous perfume of women smelling of elderberry and framed by

"violet starlight". I also think , at least for me, these wonderful females may be more than human -- perhaps the presence of trees guarding this field and hugging those who have been lost and weary. Overhead, the cosmic light adds a divine and healing quality.

all is not madness

are there not

still small delights?

ragged bodies made whole

now supine,

enveloped in the arms

of magnificent women

smothered in elderberry,

and violet starlight

The Green Myth Of Me built on Granite connects the mind/body to the earth in a beautifully descriptive and sensory way. The opening stanza is intoxicating with its

details and stir of ingredients that create this "fragrant tea".

Picture me as a landscape, green strata over deep brown earth

that's rich with peat, the colour of seeped tannins

steeped in rainwater that has become a rich broth, a fragrant tea

The poem becomes more intense as the speaker describes how the land has forged

the strength and prevalence of her people

The land of my birth has always forged steadfast folk,

able to withstand and keep on withstanding

with solid granite hearts - not hardened, but steady as rock.

Above, there's the layers of life and movement - a ripple of grasses,

wildflowers, rushes, reeds that rustle in the wind,

And I love the idea of " solid granite hearts" being those of constancy and

endurance while still allowing for breath to invigorate growth and bloom

that passes from one generation to the next. A language of life that ripples

through the plants and is carried by the wind. -- understood by those who

listen and pay attention to the landscape and its unfolding beauty.

Overall, a collection of stanzas that unify and prompt one to perceive how "stone" and "green" are symbiotic when creating the soul of both human and earth. An interconnecedtness we all ( at one time or another)" strive to feel and comprehend.

Thank you For sharing such beautiful and evocative poetry. I so much enjoyed these.

My best

Wendy Howe

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I greatly love and admire the collaged work of Jenny Lloyd. Her imaginative melding of pictures haunt me with both beauty and depth that linger long after studying her art . This exceptional work, frpm her ,"Flowers of Palestine series" is very dear to me as I grieve for and empathize with the plight of Gazans now and in the many instances that became before. Despite the horror of constant bombing, the uprooting of homes and families, flowers still bloom somewhere among the rubble, the smoke and chaos. And the children, are also the flowers of this torn nation. I look at this work again and again and think back to former cease fires when for a few brief hours or days, mothers/women had a fragile chance to breathe, to cook meals for their children and reflect on precious things while knowing destruction and danger could enter at any time. And I ask how does one survive knowing the momentary bloom of peace is l wilting in the midst of oppression and persecution? Maybe, it's just about "being in the moment", dreaming of nothing but staying alive and hugging that moment along with your sons and daughters, your family. Thank you for posting this incredible image and what it inspired for me. Let us hope and pray there will be a lasting cease fire soon.

During The Cease Fire

A girl stands on the roof

feeding pigeons. Swabs of bread

litter the cement. The bird's bubbling song

brings comfort like the verse of a nursery rhyme

Downstairs, her white-veiled mother

is cooking stew. Embalmed in the scent

of garlic, lemon and mint, she feels

they are still in a safe section

of the city. Wind riles the curtains

where trees mirage their presence

in shadow. She remembers a hillside

terraced in stone with high grass

and olive branches looming on each ledge;

the air soaked in light and sea.

An ancient place where she walked

lost in a labyrinthine of time

and thought, an incentive

that would give her daughter a name

Rawdha meaning blooming garden..

Crowds chant loudly in the distance.

She drops her spoon and leaves

to retrieve her child wondering

if they will stay safe,

taste the evening meal and fall asleep

on bed linens taken

clean from their own closet.

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